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Sample College Essay 1
Prompt: Tell us about a person who has influenced you in a significant way.
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Sample College Essay 2
Prompt: There is a significant difference between a stupid mistake and a clever one. Give an example of a "clever" mistake and explain how it benefited you or others.
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